Oh, brilliant! I followed the link from the Skip Beat comm and I am so very glad I did because you handled the characters wonderfully and I was completely entranced the entire time. Kyoko was so very Kyoko-ish, and I loved Ren's struggle with his, er, manly instincts. :D The little touches were lovely, like Ren's English books and the reference to Kyoko's demon.
It's up to you whether you'd like to continue this piece - I enjoyed it as is, so don't feel that you need to keep going, but I would be very happy if you continued writing in the fandom. Skip Beat has so very few fanfics dedicated to it, but this excellent story more than makes up for at least five or six. :D
Congratulations on a great fic, and I'll be memming this. Thanks for writing!
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Date: 2007-11-20 07:50 am (UTC)It's up to you whether you'd like to continue this piece - I enjoyed it as is, so don't feel that you need to keep going, but I would be very happy if you continued writing in the fandom. Skip Beat has so very few fanfics dedicated to it, but this excellent story more than makes up for at least five or six. :D
Congratulations on a great fic, and I'll be memming this. Thanks for writing!