Don't worry about the word choice... it was perfectly on! ^^

This was fabulous. I loved the way you wrote Kyouya, and his inner musing fascinated me. I really enjoy the bitter, beautiful irony of this fic, and I love that you managed to capture here. It was absolutely wonderful!

And I agree completely with your assessment of Kyouya in the author's notes. XD Sometimes it seems that, for such a confident person, he doesn't know himself very well at all.

But anyway, stupendous job! ^^ I loved it!